tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post3623668464630849491..comments2010-06-19T19:56:55.348-07:00Comments on Uncle Tee Books: [Fiction] Friday - June 11, 2010Uncle Teehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02566469545552643903noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-33365143146284019522010-06-17T07:35:02.404-07:002010-06-17T07:35:02.404-07:00defiantly leaves us the reader wondering what has ...defiantly leaves us the reader wondering what has happened and begging for more.<br /><br /><br />visitors can see my piece at http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2010/06/leather-tack-and-tears.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-40830248400561063072010-06-16T07:26:06.449-07:002010-06-16T07:26:06.449-07:00Uncle Tee I love chapter 2. You didn't disappo...Uncle Tee I love chapter 2. You didn't disappoint. It was brilliant. Such a great twist, I got so excited when the policeman said 'Her ma’am'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-71380169939828897182010-06-14T09:35:41.128-07:002010-06-14T09:35:41.128-07:00Thanks to everyone for commenting...so glad you li...Thanks to everyone for commenting...so glad you liked it. By popular demand I added a "chapter 2" after the asterisks. Tell me what you think.Uncle Teehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566469545552643903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-62738630680561753012010-06-13T10:49:07.903-07:002010-06-13T10:49:07.903-07:00Excitement and suspence...I Love It!!!Excitement and suspence...I Love It!!!MeMe Chttp://charter.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-72291613878339811122010-06-13T07:32:16.796-07:002010-06-13T07:32:16.796-07:00He stared at her from the end of the hallway...wil...He stared at her from the end of the hallway...will she recognize the sound of his footsteps when he strolls up to her door?<br />Need to know.Nonahttp://charter.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-22044763238137096962010-06-12T05:30:49.664-07:002010-06-12T05:30:49.664-07:00I'm in the same boat as your other readers. Yo...I'm in the same boat as your other readers. You may have to widen your point-of-view, but I really want to know what happened on the other side of the neighbor's door. Show us some action, please?<br /><br />You have the suspense down pat!Laura Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407312422139066511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-87143105012542329022010-06-11T20:20:37.028-07:002010-06-11T20:20:37.028-07:00Seriously - I want to know more too! I imaging the...Seriously - I want to know more too! I imaging the cop received a shotgun blast to the chest and the woman is dead as well.<br />Great job keeping the reader wanting more.John Penderhttp://johnpender.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-43870821868737569262010-06-11T14:11:29.808-07:002010-06-11T14:11:29.808-07:00This was an interesting story. You left me wonderi...This was an interesting story. You left me wondering what he did to the cop and what happened with the neighbor.Walthttp://www.waltinpa.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-37586693588121946572010-06-11T09:36:17.862-07:002010-06-11T09:36:17.862-07:00I want to know more. Was the neighbour in? If so w...I want to know more. Was the neighbour in? If so what happened to her? Where did he get a key? You can't end it like this...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2179560881744080423.post-80460592230279345082010-06-11T05:23:43.948-07:002010-06-11T05:23:43.948-07:00You have created an intriguing mystery to ponder h...You have created an intriguing mystery to ponder here, all from the perspective of the peep hole. Such a narrowed point of view, but from it comes a clever tale. Very clever.<br />Blessings<br />Adam BAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com